I am a student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Annyeonghaseyo Guys, the past few week we have been writing about diary entry's while the others are doing swimming lessons . do you like what I've done ? i hope you like it .
HI Maria my name Sotheara i am in one of your class room. I really like your diary writing and why were the cars beeping so much anyways i think you could tell us why the cars were beeping.
annyeonghaseyo Maria it's Zainab coming at you with my amazing comments. first of all I really liked the way you exaggerated your feeling using only words.maybe next time try to add some adjectives but everything else is perfect. Bye From Zainab
HI Maria my name Sotheara i am in one of your class room. I really like your diary writing and why were the cars beeping so much anyways i think you could tell us why the cars were beeping.
ReplyDeleteannyeonghaseyo Maria it's Zainab coming at you with my amazing comments.
ReplyDeletefirst of all I really liked the way you exaggerated your feeling using only words.maybe next time try to add some adjectives but everything else is perfect.
Bye From Zainab