I am a student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
This week we are learning about persuasive writing. the topic is " should we use animals for work"
my opinion was should people use animals to work because they can do things that we cannot
Hi Maria, I like the way you added a nice background and nice linking words and I like the way you added some time order words like firstly. Maybe next time you should probably check on your punctuation but this is a nice piece of writing. This reminds me of helpful animals in the world. Great job!
Hi Maria,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you added a nice background and nice linking words and I like the way you added some time order words like firstly. Maybe next time you should probably check on your punctuation but this is a nice piece of writing.
This reminds me of helpful animals in the world.
Great job!